Comments on: What’s Your Tweetable Elevator Pitch? http://www.stemlegal.com/strategyblog/2009/whats-your-tweetable-elevator-pitch/ by Steve Matthews Thu, 29 Jul 2010 15:11:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Steve Matthews http://www.stemlegal.com/strategyblog/2009/whats-your-tweetable-elevator-pitch/comment-page-1/#comment-1266 Steve Matthews Mon, 06 Jul 2009 15:47:02 +0000 http://www.stemlegal.com/strategyblog/?p=192#comment-1266 Thanks for the feedback, Thorne. Yours is a cleaner alternative. By including the extra terms I was hoping to get the reader to ask, 'what kind of work?', and perhaps inspired further investigation. Thanks for the feedback, Thorne. Yours is a cleaner alternative. By including the extra terms I was hoping to get the reader to ask, ‘what kind of work?’, and perhaps inspired further investigation.

]]> By: Thorne http://www.stemlegal.com/strategyblog/2009/whats-your-tweetable-elevator-pitch/comment-page-1/#comment-1263 Thorne Sun, 05 Jul 2009 14:26:25 +0000 http://www.stemlegal.com/strategyblog/?p=192#comment-1263 RE: "Stem does leg work to help law firms get noticed:" You couldn't shorten this and make it more direct: "Stem helps law firms get noticed:" RE: “Stem does leg work to help law firms get noticed:”

You couldn’t shorten this and make it more direct:

“Stem helps law firms get noticed:”

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